The latest post from FreightTrain was a story I really enjoyed. Of course, I enjoy all the stories I post on there. That is what being an editor means.
So, it would be more useful if I commented on why I enjoyed the story. You can find it here: http://ftzine.blogspot.com/2008/06/twilight-time-by-michelle-reale-bernice.html
I particularly liked the descriptions. Michelle is very good at bringing the reader into the scene and keeping them there. She also dove nicely into the old woman's head, bringing her thoughts and feelings to the front of the story. The imagination of Bernice, lusting for Nardo, is quite compelling.
That's all for now. Off to work on a new website.
Thursday, June 5, 2008
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